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TheDeskShot by sanfranguy TheDeskShot by sanfranguy
It's now 97% complete, obvious things need fixing, but will mostly be addressed in post work.

This is the final desk shot, where the camera ends up for the interaction.
There will be a sense of movement as random cars go by, they'll light up the desk with white headlights/ orange backlight,s which should look nice, also with ambient music and very low street noise, the project will be complete.

Cinema 4D & Photoshop.

10 minute render
4 day project
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mossawi Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2008   Digital Artist
l0rds1lv3r Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2007
that's very nice
steven07 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2007
VERY cool:D
drawerx Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2005
the whole image looks really nice, i like it very much, but i must say that there are a couple of things that could be better, one of those is the pen, looks like if flying, maybe thats the sense of it isn it?, and the reflections on the lamp looks a little weird, but in overall is a great work :D
jaakobou Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2005
pen looks like it's floating :crazy:
iwannabamp3 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2004
Very slick, very well lit
jaakobou Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2004
something's not right with the shade on the chair ... :crazy:
Analog-42 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2004
awomse work man another fav..that only took 10 minutes to render come u didnt use vray this time??
SnowAngel- Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2004
Awesome job, love how you even modelled a PDA =3
TDBK Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2004  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The lighting is extremely impressive!! Very good. :D
psychosilence Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2004
nice one. but some objects seem to be floating on the surface. especially the pen, the map and the wire of the telephone...
nichr0n Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2004
computer looks like a sager ;p
Serve Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2004
Everything looks much more populated and 'used' now. Really slick. Love it.
viremaster Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2004  Hobbyist Digital Artist
de comp. doens't look finnished
bluespeed9 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2004  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, I must say that the most impressive part of this piece by far would be the lighting, I really appreciate the rig that you have set up here. Damn fine work. Still, the modelling is not to be overlooked, I seem some nice touches that really make for a sense of realism. Finally, I dig the way the scene is set up, there's a nice feel to it as if it's a real place that gets used on daily basis. On the other hand, there are somethings about this scene that bother me. For example, there's a blow out spot on the ceiling from the one lamp that's a bit intense and thus, unrealistic looking. Also, the monitor's screen and the phone's panel are blank but I guess that's something you'll pick up in the post work. Anyway, all that aside, this is quite the impressive piece. :thumbsup:
Ponce Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2004
this is pimp!! but there are some stuff i dont like but its not yet complete but still ill tell u: the palm cause its standing and well i think it should be layed on the table :S then the pencil and the wire of the telephone seem like not OVER the table cause they have like a shadow they seem like a little higher and well the laptop that has no keys a white screen and IMO a too strong reflection on the part where the keys go :S it should be like more opaque... IMO

i hope that helps but its all good better than anything ive seen cause it looks pretty damn realistic
xxoblivionxx Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2004
really kool man nice work :)
niteangel Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2004
hey very nice!~ :D But the pencil seems floating while the PDA can't be like that vertically standing on the table...Perhaps you can just add a black sharp shadow under the pencil ;)
sanfranguy Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2004  Professional Digital Artist
thx for the tip.

I've addressed that now.
lordolof Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2004
aquaglow gave you some points.. and something more I thought of was the lack of bumpmaping on the table.

I do like the whole scene, and I love that lamp at the back with the warm color,,
aquaglow Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2004
Nice work. A fast render for such good lighting, it obviously can't be true GI at that speed. Did you emulate it using a sphere of lights or something?

A few minor crits in case you need them:
The telephone wire appears to be floating a tiny bit above the desk.
Laptop and phone are far too shiny, turn down the raytracing imo.
The volumetric lighting on the lamp looks cool, but doesn't fit in with the rest of the scene, and there appears to be no physical reason for it. It looks good, so only take it out if you're going for realism I suppose.
Texturing issues with bottom part of bookcase on far left?
Too much spec on leaves in vase imo.

Overall great work! :)
sanfranguy Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2004  Professional Digital Artist
"Did you emulate it using a sphere of lights or something"

No fake radiosity sphere's. I would never use a sphere inside. Now there is a cube of lights, but they're all relative to the ceiling lights above, that has the same effect as a dome and works better for interiors.

Thanks for the other tips. I am finishing up as we speak some of the small things that the client wants changing.

Time = Money (that's a good thing)
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